Matthew Haddock:
"Looking at this storyboard and comparing it to your genre for your media product I think that the start seems to be very boring and that it will struggle to get the audiences attention."
Kamal Singh:
"It Looks very boring and dreary and I don't think it reflects the crime genre."
Hannah Morris:
"It looks like it is going to be a very serious start which can build tension and the start is very unconventional."
Ben Treloar:
"The first needs improving but I really like the ending to this storyboard as you are planning to use a range of different shots."
Looking at this feedback from our storyboard it looks like we are going to have to make a new storyboard. We agree with the comments because we only have two minutes to do the start and it should be gripping and attracting the audiences attention. We still need to use a variety of shots so that it is engaging as well. Crime films tend to have serious starts like The Dark Knight so we will continue this convention onto our next storyboard.
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